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Maria Grace's avatar

Your hook was aggressively hooky (and I stand by that word). A few posts in and you’re already capturing an audience like a pro! I’m following and subbing for sure! This starving artist is here to learn a thing or two (or ten)

Sincerely,

a fan ❤️

Cory Althoff's avatar

Thanks so much! And I'm happy you enjoyed my hooky haha!

Frank Sadiq's avatar

Really good read. The part about validating the audience before fully committing stood out to me. A strong hook matters, but making sure it connects with the right people matters just as much.

Cory Althoff's avatar

Appreciate the feedback thank you!

Daleen Berry's avatar

Great lede, Cory, which is journalism lingo for hook. 👏🏻🥳💪🏻

I might have a suggestion, but it's buzzing at the corner of my mind, so I need to let it percolate for a bit. 😅